Other Details in a Formal Letter (I)
  19 August 2003
Last week, we learned about the essential parts of a letter such as recipient's address, date, salutation and complimentary close. There are other parts of letters that were left unmentioned. You might have wondered whether and where to add the subject line.

First of all, let us have a look at this letter:

 J&B Associates
 13 Nakorn Chaisi Road,
 Dusit, Bangkok
 10300

 11 August 2003

 Khun Mana Meesak
 Payathai Mention
 Apartment 5 Payathai soi 3
 Payathai Bangkok
 10400

 Subject: Rent Contract Renewal

 Dear Khun Mana,

 As the rental contract for your apartment will expire on 30 August 2003, we are sending you a new one. Once you find the terms satisfactory, please sign date on page 3 and return the contract to us by 25 August 2003.

 If you require further assistance in this matter, please do not hesitate to contact me at the office.

 Respectfully yours,


 Akom Kanchanasak
 Senior Property Agent Advisor

 AK/pc.

 Enclosure: New rental contract (3 pages)

 Cc: Khun Saowanee Chareonsuk, property owner

The new elements in this letter are

Subject Line
You can add the subject line before the salutation; however, it is not necessary. If you wish to add the subject line, make sure that your subject is clear. You can also use 'Re:...'

Subject: Annual Report
Re: Product Launch

Initials
Your initials consist of the first letters of your first and last name. For example, in the letter above, Khun Akom Kanchanasak is the writer. His initials are 'AK'. And let us assume that Prangchompoo Chawakit is his secretary, who typed this letter for him. Her initials are 'PC'. We put the writer's initials first in capital letters followed by the typist's initials in small block letters-as in the example above.

Enclosure
If you are enclosing some document with the letter, this information is given at the end of the letter. For instance, if you are applying for a job, you will need to send a copy of your resume and perhaps a photograph.

Enclosures: 1) resume
                 2) one passport photo

Copy
If you need to send the same letter to another person, the addressee must also be notified. For example, the letter and enclosure as in above example is also copied and sent to the property owner. 'cc.' is short for 'carbon copy'. Although we no longer use carbon copy paper, the term is still used.

Subject and Enclosure
Besides stressing the subject and enclosure on different lines, you can also include them in the body of your letter.